O’Neill Surf Camp 2008

January 10, 2008 rmc205a1

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O’Neill Surf Camp 2008 

Do you want to have a real cool vacation, where you can next to going out and the partying enjoy the best sport on earth, surfing?! You should go with us on the O’Neill surf camp Mimizan! This is the biggest, oldest and really the best surf camp in Europe. The waves in front of the Mimizan coast are in the summer perfect for both beginners as advanced surfers. Wave surfing and bodyboarding is hot, because these are cool and challenging sports with a nice beach lifestyle.  

Where do you go?
Mimizan isn’t just for surf and bodyboard freaks, but for everybody one of the greatest vacation destinations in France. Mimizan lays at the Atlantic coast, has big tropical beaches and it’s real fun to go out at the pub Bar Le Surf and the night club Bar Americain. There are also a lot of good restaurants in the nice center. At the surf camp itself is our own surfbar and we also have a nice place to chill with a lot of couches where we can watch a movie or listen to some music. There is a great atmosphere and everyone feels at home right away.You stay at Camping de la Plage wich is locatet at 800 meters from the beach and 500 meters from the center of Mimizan. The camp has always a nice atmosphere! The bathrooms are clean and hot showers are free. The reception has lockers and there is a supermarket on the property. There are also possibilities to use the internet. 

What are you doing?
On the camp we have a lot of surfboards, bodyboards, skimboards and cool beachcruisers. A lot of contestants don’t have much surfexperience so everyone can join us. The surfcampteam is there for you to give you an unforgettable vacation.  For the surflessons you can book several combination packets that include the rental from your gear and the lessons. 

The activities you can join next to the surfinglessons are:
*Cocktail Party
* Music or Surftrip
* Beach party
* Mimizan danceparty
* O’Neill surfcontest
* Beachcruisers

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